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for Consequences of Abandonment

by ryukotsusei

schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lemee see...Mukuro walking into Yusuke's apartment and basically telling him to go to Hiei? WIN.
A HAWT Christmas lemon that melted my brain in front of the family? STILL WIN.

Porn...it's what's for Christmas. I LUFF YOU LIEK WHOA. *gropes*
person shiori_foxies_mom@yahoo.com
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't like it when anyone breaks Hiei's heart. I'm glad Yusuke finally came to his senses and fixed things with him and Hiei.
person SesshomarusSecret
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your work for years, however, can you let Hiei top more often? BTW, another great story.
person Kogas Hentai Luver
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great piece. I would have made Yusuke grovel some more. What a jerk picking Keiko over Hiei. I'm thinking Hiei needed to punish Yusuke before taking him back ^_~ Yeah, a good spanking is just what Yusuke should have gotten.

Happy Holidays
KHL
person kit-kit
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i loved the emotional rollarcoaster
person AmyMcClair
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for that. It made a really nice Christmas surprise. I really like your works. I must go open presents now or my hubby will feel neglected.

Great story.
person Kimisan
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome one-shot, I really enjoyed the angst. I felt sad for Hiei, poor guy got dumped for Keiko. Sorry, she belongs with Kurama IMO, better than Yusuke! On that note you did a wonderful job and help me look pass this pain. I'll require more smex from you in the near future. *Hands you naked pics of Aoshi*