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August 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I really love how you write. I didn't want to comment before now, because I wanted to read the whole thing first but OMG I was laughing so hard through the entire story. Brava. I love all of your stories. On to the next. Please write a new one soon.
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it need I say more lol
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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story! write mire soon
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fan bloody tastic!!!! I bow to you writing.
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the end of chapter 12 was so sweet and i dont know what but it acually made me cry
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all i have to say is i enjoyed reading this story. it was interesting, suspenseful and full of different moments that i luved every one of them. i'm glad to see everyone hav a happy ending, even yomi with his lil princess. lol. again luved the fic.
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think that is the best ending i've ever read that doesn't make you thinking that you have to read more bcause you ended it on such a great note
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved it! I read every chapter that came after six which is where I last left off. OMG it was everything I hoped for and so much more. I was delightfully surprised by the last chapter. I don't know what it is about Kurama angry, but for some reason it's hot to me LOL. I do hope this isn't the end? Or is it? Either way it was a wonderful story, and if there is anymore to come I definately look forward to it.
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was a little strange and was a little sappy in my opinion, but good. For the epilogue maybe you can have Kurama pissed off at Hiei for something and then Kurama can go commando and put Hiei through a month of being tied up in one of the many youko dens while Kurama shows Hiei punishment which maybe can result in Hiei getting pregnant instead? xD Just an idea that would add a twist to the story....
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love the children. I think I'm personally in love with Ryu though LOL. I enjoyed this. You made everyone perfectly with the personalities, and how well you planned this out. I was loving it throughout the chapter. ::Sighs all dreamy:: Everyone all happy and married, and the babies! WOW! This is an amazing story, I'm sad to see it ending.