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for Tangled Destinies

by ForbiddenRyu

person Chaos
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome great as usual hiei/yukinas are always so sweet. I liked how you made botan have feelings for hiei but it was kind of sad.
person pink-emo-ranger
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again the Yukina and Hiei moments are beautiful. Another one to add to my fave's list.
person Kimisan
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow,this was really good. Loved the angst, almost made me feel sorry for Hiei, almost. Then again Yukina's fucking lucky, I tell ya. Hiei can come make me his. I wouldn't object, Aoshi might though. Keep up the good work!
person Takhisiss (nsi)
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always a wonderful story told by a master storyteller. The scenes you wrote were dramatic and your timing was perfect. Who couldn't help but feel sorry for Hiei and Yukina with everything they have gone through together in this story. I know I sure did. I would say anyone thinking about reading it should definately do so, it's well worth the time :)
person Chikage
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAYYYYY!!!! You've done it again!!! I LOVE IT! No doubt about it! But please continue Thrill of the Forbidden...It's sooo....good PLEASE.....T_T