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for Worlds Apart

by ShioriFoxiesMom

person foxxraven
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww I loved it do a sequal please!!!!! oh last secean HOTT!!!!
person steph8503
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeaaassssse write a sequal to this. id love you forever.:)
person bob
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Of course we want a sequel, I need a sequel, I have to know what hapens to the happy couple next!
person Diane
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK on the names thing, in the Japanese both are Shuuichi but the spellings are different, Kurama is Shuuichi with 2 u's & his step-brother is Shuichi with 1 u. In the dub they renamed the step-brother something like Kotoka, personally I prefer both as Shuuichi just with different spellings, it can't be THAT hard to figure out which 1 they're talking about.
person comicfancat
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey chapter 4/8 had a different ending than on FF.net and boy it was great.Wondering if that was an after thought when writting this on AFF.netIcan't wait to see if you add anything else to this.Nice job
person Kerbear
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another added part to this chapter,(high five to you)it was just what the chapter needed.You have a great imagination and I hope you can put it to good use as a pro some day.Very nicely done
person foxxraven
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear Lord that was incredible please, update soon i want to read more and see how far Kurama falls into depression. I really hope they come to thier seneses. e-mail me when update please
person bob
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wanna hit them. they both love each other they need to stop making it so difficult!!!
person zekesbabe
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I still don't get tired of your stories. I've probs read this on FF.net but I still love it. In fact I found myself reading a bit of Hiei and Kurama: A Love Story before I went to work the other day. Well...back to reading one of you other stories.

Peace.

Luv
Zekesbabe
xxx
person comicfancat
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why are you combining the chapters?It seems rushed this way and the story is way to good for that(I've read it on ff.net)Its a great story please take your time with it here on this site.