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by saiyanb

person kitkit
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me love..and i can see hiei having a problem with thinking he is all evil
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know what I love about this story? It's funny and sweet, very different than the other stories on aff. And I love different. The slapstick parts leave me snickering and slapstick is an aspect of YYH that doesn't carry over to fanfic often, so I'm glad you brought that to us. Then there's the sweetness. Yusuke thinking only of his love for his mates and the entire scene at the end where he reviews his life were heartwarming. I hope you continue to post here, you're giving the readers something refreshing and different that puts a smile on their face. Plus, when you write lemons they're smoking hot (and I'm hoping there's a lemon coming soon!)
person kitkit
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow me love
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic! I can't wait for your next update.
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, this is so lighthearted and adorable. Every post makes me giggle. I adore this story.

And I can't wait for the lemon.
person TopazKat
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Happy holidays indeed. This is such an amusing story and I am very happy to get the chance to re-read it.
person ficfan3484
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I couldn't stop laughing, I had to take breathing breaks from this story, Hiei and the Ferry girls are the best, So is Kurama abdoning Hiei, and seeing Yusuke's mood for the first time and pretty much everything. The ending was the best.
person Kuroi
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
TTwTT [hangs head] I'm so sorry. ._. I've been beta-ing a bare page a day with deadlines coming up... ._. I'll try to get everything done really soon... @_@ I didn't mean to suddenly have such a hectic schedule - this is really new for me; up until well, up until a little bit after I started betaing Brides, I had so much free time on my hands that I spent most of it bored and idly doing nothing. @_@ Then apps and the like came up and my free time just died on me. ._. I'll try my best to get things out as soon as possible, and my schedule should clear up in the next month, I hope. ._.

[runs off to stay up another two hours this night to beta]

--Kuroi
person Snow Ahriman
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL poor JR. I don't think he's going to make it out alive. He'll end up dead with three hot ex-bishi's to cry over him.
person kit-kit
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn koenma can't cum until he sates all of his lovers..wow i can see how yusuke and hiei and kurama can take advantage of that....im guessing one round just isn't going to be enough.