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I really enjoyed this arc of stories. You have a unique sense of humor. Right now I'm totally engulfed in your story Meikai Wars. I tried to leave a review there, but you must have accrued too many for them all to show up. I tried to let you know that MW's chapters, from 14 on all need to be fixed. Please hurry, as I'm dying to know how that story turns out. :o)

WOW THAT WAS HOT!!! i think i need a new pair of undies. *blush* but anyway that was the best lemon scene i read in a long time. i was kind of sad to see this story end. can't wait to see what you come up with next. but wait what about koenma's jealous cousin? is there going to be another story maybe a continuation of this or something? cuz im sure ur fans would love to know more about this.

You know I thought that this was a great chapter up to the Hiei part. from then on I was turned off by it, but I read it until the end. I must say, that you should have warned us that there would be a rape in this chapter. Wheather you think so or not, there was rape in this chapter and it was the perfect defination of rape. Hiei was stripped, tied up, and raped by those that claim to love him. I get that Hiei is stubborn and all that, but what they did to him was wrong. They ganged banged him, it wasn't making love. He repeatedly told them no, and begged them not to have sex with him in the female form. They didn't listen to him. yusuke and Kurama chased Hiei around stripping, ripping his clothes off of him while Koenma sat back watching and laughing. Then they forciably tied him up and threw him on the bed. Hiei didn't even get any forplay. Yusuke Forced Hiei to have anal sex with him. All while Kurama forced Hiei to perform oral sex on him. Then they all denied him any sort of pleasure until he begged and cried for it, until it became painful, until they literally broke his spirit. I mean kurama and Yusuke got oral sex, hiei should have got some too. Koenma then comes along and rides, him/her until Hiei can't even function. I don't care that they were married and that it was thier honeymoon, they should have been more considerate. I mean they got all the pleasure, foreplay and Hiei basicly got none. It was rape no matter how you slice it. I thought thier might be a ray of hope when kurama promised to make it up to the fire demon. Maybe even let Hiei take him while Yusuke and Koenma went at it, but there was nothing, except a horny koenma jumping all three of them. It would have been nice for them to include Hiei in thier Honeymoon, instead of using him. Using him so bad, Raping Him!! Give hiei the gift of letting him top at least once, that would have been nice. I mean he gave them all children for peats sake! I don't mean for this to be a flame, I really do love your stories. It just really upset me the last part of this chapter. Maybe you could write another chapter and give Hiei his dues, or rewrite the last chapter some so it doesn't seem like rape, because it really was rape; or even add a last part on the last chapter so Hiei gets some compensation. It was quite painful to read this for someone that has been raped, been through what Hiei just went through. It brings back to many painful, familiar memories. I don't read rapes for this very reason. Like I said, I just wish that there was a warning that this chapter contained rape, then I could have avoided it and I wouldn't be sitting here crying right now, unable to stop because of all the painful memories and flashbacks flooding my mind.

wow that was a lemon

That was defenantely one of the hottest sex scenes ever written. Lucky, lucky Koenma! I wonder if he'll ever tell them about the drug he took? This story was well worth waiting for. Hope to see more of these four in the future.

yay i can't wait, i love smut, smuts the best and please don't take forever and a day to up date it was bad enough to have to wait for wedding. and whats with the cousin is he really going to be a thret or was he just to make things interesting just then and nothing is really going to happen. but any way great chap can't wait for more hopefully soon and not a mounth from now. :)

love the story and can't wait for the smut

Alright! They're finally married! Bring on the smut!

love it

I love this story a lot! I can't wait for the next chapter. As for betaing your stories I would absolutely love too! I would enjoy to beta one of your stories for you email, if you would like me too. I'd be done editing them pretty quickly. As for the story, it's great love Yusuke's action. He's perverted but he cares a lot for his lovers. Again can't wait for the next chapter!