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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I. LOVE. it.
Please, PLEASE continue with the story - you have a wonderful, inticate plot going and it's only chapter one!
Please, PLEASE continue with the story - you have a wonderful, inticate plot going and it's only chapter one!
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great idea I like the intertwining of stories. You write Hiei so very well It is positivly yummness to the 10th degree. I'm looking forward to a little whoop ass in the fights tommorow. It would be interesting to see Youko vs. Hiei as Hiei was all hot to trot in the Miakia tournament with Youko, he's got a real hard on for getting a change to finally fight him. I would love to see how you would handle that:)
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In the last few months, you and Kimisan have written some great fics, most of which contain my favorite couple. I can't wait to see how this fills out, it's already great. Update soon!
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, and i love the little thing about Botan having to buy batteries frequently, that made me smile. Keep up the good work.
p.s. It's a shame Botan didn't wear that blue mesh shirt. I woulda love'd to see that...or read it
p.s. It's a shame Botan didn't wear that blue mesh shirt. I woulda love'd to see that...or read it