rate_review Reviews

i just love this story i keep comeing back to it

Damn...wish you'd update this story. It's absolutely fabulous.

this is an amazing story please keep going this is to good to let go!

I really hope you update this story. It's one of the best I've seen on this site.

I like the idea of you doing a compliment to Kimi-san's story, 'Undercover Cases'. I'm anxious to see how this will continue and just what the outcome will be.

This is off to a very good start. I hope you update soon. I really want to know what is going to happen next.

Wow! Very good. Could you let me know when you update? You're characterization of them is so close to seeming flawless. Keep up the awesome work. ^.^

Wonderful start, can't wait til the fighting begins. Keep up the good work. Also, I've noticed that some people cannot read author notes. I've seen this story also on another site, though I've only found the counter part on AFF. Stupid people bitch about not seeing enough Kagome/Kurama. HELLO! It's in the other author's part. If she were to go further she'd be stepping on the other author's toes. Pffft. Glad I don't write or I'd get really pissed at the ignorance of some of these reviewers.

Very interesting work, I thought you handled the aspects of the master/slave relationship well.

Wish to see more.

Not bad. The story concept has merit. The characters actions are believable, though I would have expected more out of Kurama's character. But then again neither he or Kagome are the main focus of the story and under such circumstances its perfectly understandable. You did forget one thing though. Hiei's natural eye color is red. So it was a bit confusing when you said his eyes were tinged pink (due to arousal). Perhaps it would have been better to say "the whites of his eyes were tinged pink." Otherwise I have no complaints. I am eager to see future chapters.