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for Bound by Desire

by ryukotsusei

person AmyMcClair
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing story. You write so well. The characters are a little OCC, but I like it a lot. I would love to see part two if your muses ever allow you to write it.
person Arbitrary Doom
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.........well that was.........hot..........any way........will kurama get a turn?..........please keep going.......XP!!!!!!!
person waterkami
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES, YES! Please, a part 2 would be awesome! Please!! Everyone already knows you're the patron GOD of Yusuke/Hiei pairings!

Ah, sorry, but I'm a really big fan of Yus/Kur pairings, though I do enjoy reading about them with Hiei thrown in as well. I love your work, hon. If you can find the motivation, please write more!
person Cesia
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SOO HOT! ^o^ I just totally loved it. Perfect way to end a day. Please let there be a part two. I'd just love that! *gives cookies to you muses* Need something to wash it down with? *hands them giant bottles of sake* Please continue! Haven't read a good YYH fic in over 3 months until this one. *faints*
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So...what do I have to do to get you to write that second chapter? You know I want to see some Kurama action, and your muse doesn't generally lean that way, but you're setting us up for that...or a threesome. YES A THREESOME! *dances, then flashes you*

Hot...I love a demented Seme!Hiei, and why is it that everyone writes Hiei as being able to give REALLY GOOD HEAD? Must be canon. Seriously though, HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT. Nothing like waking up in the morning to a little Hiei/Yusuke action (with Kurama watching). And you get props for having Hiei finally do something useful with his belts.
person kit-kit
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it as always i can't wait to see the 2nd chapter
person pink-emo-ranger
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? This is diabolically perfect in all its smutty way. The great outdoors aren't going to be the same again, *chuckles*