rate_review Reviews

I read chapter one over on ff.net and thought it was fantastic! But I have to say, it was nothing compared to the brilliance of this chapter. Not only did you use just the right language to convey the rape, but you kept it from being too graphic while still maintaining the erotic and painful nature of the scene. BRAVA!

Oh god...wow...um...yeah, and I lost my brain somewhere in the middle of the chapter - that was rough. BUT THAT'S A GOOD THING. I have to say that I've read ALOT of fanfiction and I've never seen that done in the YYH fandom before *applause* THANK YOU for giving me something fresh and new AND well written. You're a joy to read.

A ton of good lines in this, but the two that stood out the most for me were:

“But in everyone lurks an Othello, she will believe me with time." and "His nerves were singing the Holy Grail."

There's so much wrongness in this chapter, it made we wince, and I suspect that our favourite fire demon will come to some sort of misunderstanding before he comes to Kurama's defense.

damn. thats all i can say. the 1st chapter got my attention but this last one....damn. poor kurama...all this for his mother's sanity...man he's...i just dont know man. i wonder wat will happen next, will hiei find out? update soon and great job with this one

OMG! That was awesome, please PLEASE Oh pretty please with a huge strawberry covered in chocolate cream on top, update!

I really wanna read the rest! PLEASE UPDATE!!! PLEASE!!!!!

I like it. So little actual information was ever given about Hatanaka in the series (unsure about the manga) that I think you're safe taking him pretty much anywhere.

I really like your writing style. You give enough information and detail to form a nice, comfy mental picture without bogging down your story or your reading with unnecessary "stuff." It's very enjoyable to read your stories and I look forward to the remaining chapters of this tale.

Can't wait for the next update.

this is really creapy. I love it. cna you please update soon? I want to see how kurama handles him.

Please update soon!

OH this is GOOD. Really good, it's so nice to have you back! Loving how you manage to keep Kurama IC even though Hatanaka is harassing him - kicking the man in the back of the knees, the hidden evil in his words that make the hair stand up on Hatanaka's neck, all wonderful.

And Kurama and Hiei's relationship is well-balanced and beautifully executed, that trick Hiei was pulling in the play pool made me pop something laughing - that's so Hiei!

I can't wait to see more of this - Hatanaka is in for a nasty surprise if he thinks he's going to get away with harassing our favourite fox.

DGAHYAHYGYGAYGFYGU!!!!!

You...you stoppead. WHY?!?!?!?! This is already going so well and that cliffhanger so could not have come at a worse time. You must must MUST update this quickly! I'm already hooked!