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by EmbersEye

person kurama+hiei4ever
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. But man I really want to see hiei-kun come and kick that man's ass!!! and then I want shiori to throw him out on the street with out a home, then she and kurama can go back to living like before. Naturally thou I am sure you are going to have a lot more conflict before anything close to that happens, and I really can't wait for more!!! So please right more soon!
person Le Bish
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This made me sick to my stomach and god help me I want more....

Hiei should rape the bastard and then cut off his dick.... I hate him now.

Update soon, I need more....
person ...
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Sick and a bit twisted, but still wonderful.
I hope you add the next chapter soon.
person UPDATE
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! I luv u! UPDATE!!! UPDATE! I luv u! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!
person kurochan
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.....SO GOOOOD!!!
I cant wait for the next chapter!!
Poor Kurama....
Boy is hiei gonna be pissed...
person bob
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was.... interesting and original to say the least. It was also written well but it just made me angry that Kurama would just lie there like that. Anyway I can't wait to see what happens please update soon.
person neko kitty
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg he really did it he raped kurama O.O hatanaka should be happy that hiei didn't see them because he would be dead nice chapter you know what will be great hatanaka bouding kurama to the bed post reaping him again and Shiori chatching them
person Someone
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O Poor Kurama!

But still, it was amazing! The way you write is just stunning!
Wow! UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!! Pweeaaase? *Puppy eyes*
person fire_lilly_fox
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate his stepfather. You have given me good reason to feed him to the hounds and wait til he begs for mercy. I want to see what hiei thinks about this when he finds out. that human wouldn't last 10 seconds in hieis presence let alone what he might do to him.
person comicfancat
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a chapter number 2 turned out to be.I still think Hiei should find out and do some small damage of his own,maybe even have Hiei and Shori find out together (evil)So does Kurama have a small upper hand or not in this after all telling Shori goes both ways.