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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am purely innocent, I did not just read that!
...okay...maybe I'm lying, but that's not the point, Can I say it?
IT WAS FANTASTIC! AMAZING! FABULOUS AND...-ahem- I have to go...incredulously awesome.
...okay...maybe I'm lying, but that's not the point, Can I say it?
IT WAS FANTASTIC! AMAZING! FABULOUS AND...-ahem- I have to go...incredulously awesome.
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hah! Loved it . .
Funny, but sweet, and oh, so cute! *SQEEEEAL*
Funny, but sweet, and oh, so cute! *SQEEEEAL*
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story was very entertaining. There were a couple of typos, but they weren't too bad. Also I recommend that you put an extra line between your paragraphs, it would make it easier to read. Otherwise, this was an excellent story.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha - I LOVED it!! First of all.. that line:
"Stick your dick up my ass or I’ll kill you,” Hiei snarled
Oh my god... I was laughing so hard. Secondly - I really appreciated that you didn't shy away from the full breadth of the English vocabulary - great writing. Third (yes, we're getting a LIST of why I liked it, haha - in hopes you'll write again.), Third This is one of three times EVER I've seen the perfect mix of passion and affection. The affection didn't detract from the passion or vice versa, as it usually does; you mixed them so well!
So.. Awesome! I can't believe this was really your first time writing one, and great job! :D
"Stick your dick up my ass or I’ll kill you,” Hiei snarled
Oh my god... I was laughing so hard. Secondly - I really appreciated that you didn't shy away from the full breadth of the English vocabulary - great writing. Third (yes, we're getting a LIST of why I liked it, haha - in hopes you'll write again.), Third This is one of three times EVER I've seen the perfect mix of passion and affection. The affection didn't detract from the passion or vice versa, as it usually does; you mixed them so well!
So.. Awesome! I can't believe this was really your first time writing one, and great job! :D
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Jesus Christ, I think I just popped something. HOLY SHIT THAT WAS HOT! *dances, shakes it, dances*
You know that teacher who told you that you couldn't write? We need to find him and slap him around, because he knows nothing. THAT WAS AMAZING.
And Hiei licking the wound he got from Yusuke because they were fighting over the last snowcone? Priceless.
You know that teacher who told you that you couldn't write? We need to find him and slap him around, because he knows nothing. THAT WAS AMAZING.
And Hiei licking the wound he got from Yusuke because they were fighting over the last snowcone? Priceless.