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by Lieriallial

person Kurakitsune
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, I'm so sorry but those last few lines made me laugh for some reason. It's just whenever I picture Kurama freaking out and saying "for the love of Kami!" it just sort of made me laugh. I mean seriously did you sort of laugh when you wrote it out? I know it's supposed to be serious but just picturing a panicking Kurama got my gander up. Wahahahahaha! Ahha (whipes tear). Now that that's out of the way. It was good and sweet, though the Keiko/Hiei part sort of made me gag. Oh, now offense to you or anything, I'm just not too big of fan of Keiko or Hiei...even when they aren't together. But I do adore Kurama/Yusuke and liiked their interractions.

Ja ne
Kurakitsune