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for Unexpected Consequences

by ForbiddenRyu

person Nekedo
schedule September 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I still love this story, and I wish it had been finished. I really enjoyed your writing when you were active. You wrote Hiei/Yukina beautifully while keeping them in character. I won’t be foolish enough to hope you’ll return someday. Your writing did influence my own when I first venturing into lemons, so I’m grateful for what you did contribute. Thanks for the memories, and hoping you’ve been doing well all these years.

person Takhisiss (nsi)
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I love the soft(?) side that Hiei is beginning to show at the end of this chapter. For all of the bastard that I know he can be and normally is I know that somewhere he has it deep down inside him.
That was a wonderful idea that Kurama had, having Yukina meet Shiori. I think it will make it easier for her having another mother to turn to (if that's what you're planning to do)
I can't wait to see what Yusuke and Kazuma's reactions will be to the news. Please update soon.
person Chikage333
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAaaahhhhh..I LOVE YOU *squeals like a fan girl* Thank you for another awesome chapter!!! I hope for more to come soon!
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet another excelent chapter!Please update soon! I love this pairing, but you're one of the few that I've seen pull it off believably...keep up the good work.

-Raine
person Takhisiss (nsi)
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yukina should have had the good sense to know that Rui wouldn't tell her something like that for no reason. But if she had to get pregnanat anyway I couldn't think of a better guy to be *daddy* I feel sorry for them both but to be honest I feel just a little (ok, a whole lot) more sorry for Hiei.
Looking forward to more, update soon please.
person AishaHawking
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* Wooo. Evil, evil cliffie. Can't wait to see what happens.
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg! that story was wonderful, and horrible all at the same time! lease don't torture oor Yukina too long...I've been waiting for smeone to attempt this pairing, and I love your approach! More please!
person Takhisiss (nsi)
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yukina and Hiei, this has got to be so distressing to the both of them. It isn't like anyone else will be able to help them either altho I think it might have been amusing if Kurama had walked in during that little scene, but I'm perverse anyway LOL. Can't wait to read the next chapter, please update soon.
person Kimisan
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thats an evil cliffy woman! What's going to happen to Yukina now? Poor girl, so oblivious to what is going on. Makes one feel sorry for her. But I love it. Keep up the good work. *Hands you Aoshi cookies*