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for Heated Moments of Jealousy

by ryukotsusei

schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. And I mean WOW. This is by far the best Yusuke/Hiei I've ever read. Not the most common pairing, but you made it just SO GOOD! It's so amazingly in character (not a common occurance) that it's unbelieveable! And as an added bonus, you threw in some Kurama/Keiko too! My favorite YYH het pairing out there! It was all really, REALLY good. And I know it's been a while, but I totally think that you should revisit this one and write out the K/K behind-the-scenes lemon. It would be soooo perfect! Please? But even if you don't, this was awesome. Thanks!
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot...just hot. Loved that you shared the fic and wrote one of the pairings, that's genius. And really, how the hell can I get Hiei to jerk off on MY BED? I'd like to write more, and talk about the hotness of the lemon but I need sleep.

You own everything. WRITE MORE.
person Kogas Hentai Luver
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well damn! Another hot ass fic. I loved the lead in with Kurama and Hiei getting all jealous and shit thinking Yusuke and Keiko still wanted each other. For such smart demons, Kurama and Hiei can be quite dense, lol. Sizzling lemon as always. You had me drooling with Hiei wanking off before Yusuke even joined in, lol. So fucking sexy. You rock my world!

Love and Kisses
Kogas Hentai Luver
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. Just WOW. You got everyone IC, I like that you didn't bash Keiko (lucky girl), and the lemon was FUCKING HOT.
person Takhisiss (nsi)
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is wow. LOL, and people talk about me dishing out the misunderstandings. You've done a wonderful job writing this, I'd love to know what happens when they all get together again in the same room. I'm glad everyone is now on the same page tho, hope to read more soon.
person kit-kit
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was so hot
person Anon
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NU BAD RYU! Kurama and keiko.. EWWW! Nuu make her die please make her die ;-; he needs to bee wiff teh smex hiei and yusuke!
person Kimisan
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Since we collaborated with the first part of this fic, I'll just comment on the lemon. What is there to talk about really besides hot steamy Hiei/Yusuke smex? You do yaoi very well dear, if you don't believe me check my panties! J/K Anyways I loved the lemon, keep em coming, literally.