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for The Taste of Sand

by LeBish

person No one
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! That was such a romatic kiss scene! I love it! Keep up da good work.
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That haiku is exactly how I'd picture Hiei being romantic. Right on. You're writing is getting better and better with every story (not that it was bad or anything, but you know what I mean). I like how they sat close in the water so that they could touch but not be seen touching.

Very cute!
person thoth_moon
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha--only Hiei, in an attempt to be courtly, could concoct that haiku--very well done!