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Its great to see that the fox and Hiei arn't perfect,and having small emotional problems that are worked out just as fast as they start.Although I'm some what against turning Shiori into a demon I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.Poor Kurama can't get up to see to his mom and that would drive him nuts,I think.Glad your mom's doing better.
Great job

It's funny, I was just thinking about this story today and so it was a pleasant surprise to come here tonight and find a new chapter... which, BTW, was truly enjoyable.

yay i love this story thanks for updating im really looking foward to your next update!

This is good. i hope that you update it soon.

Shiori a demon, I love it. It's cute that she wants to be a sexy vixen. Sincer her demon boyfriend liked her as a human it's good she'll have two forms. I hope we have more babies soon. Update soon.

Great chapter!Yet not really sure how I feel about Shiori being a demon.Maybe changing her blood an octave or two to give her a demon life span,but everyone has grown to love her as the human she is.Plus what would her would be suitor say about this.After all he likes her for her human trates,they make her unique in a demon world.Can't wait for the next chapter.A very nice job on this one

I absolutely ADORED the scene between Hiei and Shiori. I've always felt that Shiori would see Hiei as her own and that he, in turn, would see her as the mother he was denied.

BRAVA on this chapter! I can't wait to see if Shiori gets her wish.

Poor Toushi, he is very insecure. I'm glad Shiori will be able to live longer, i was hoping you would do something like that.

yay shiori become that foxy vixen whoo! lol i thought it a great idea for her to become a demon, i was wondering when you were going to mention that and im glad u did that is awesome. as for the innocent kaihei i luv him. he's just to precious for his own good and toushi man i just wanna hug him to death. i luv ur characters, cant wait to read more to dont keep me waiting too long
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YAY UPDATE!!!! SS you do realize I love you right? Hehehehe I love your writing I swear my heart starts to pound whenever I get to see that you've updated. *Giggles* Definately one of my favorite authors here on AFF.net. Anyway this chapter rocked on about 1000 levels. I love how you have the whole family coming together, and Shiroi wanting to be a DEMONESS OMG I almost fell out of my chair like "YES YES YES SOMEONE FINALLY DID IT!" I always wondered why no one ever wrote about her wanting to cross over, but I suppose it would be hard without the demon balls... hmm... DOES THIS MEANS SHE'S GONNA HOOK UP WITH HER CRUSH?! OMG I can't wait for him to see her once she's a demoness... he'll probably fall in love all over again LMAO. Hm what else... OH I love how you have the boys reacting to their new brothers... it makes perfect sense. It always annoyed me when there are more babies born into a family and an author makes everyone acceptable of it... including kids already born. Dude that is not how it goes! LOL I hated my brother from the time he was born and my parents took me to see him through the window. I started bamming on that thing LOL, but the first time I held him and got to feed him I was done for. We've been best friends since... and it's just the two of us so I guess that made us closer too he's all I got. Hehehe. Anyway I wanted to praise you for this chapter I absolutely adored it... and now I'll be checking back between updating my own story to see if you've updated. I look forward to it. Keep up the wonderful work!