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for OH BABY!

by ss_dragon_lady

schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy for them. They deserve all the happiness in the world. I really love these characters. I hope Shiori gets with her demon love too.
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And I knew he was going to have that little girl. He was so hurt when he found out the one he lost was a girl. It only makes sense, at least to me it does.
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I thought you were going to leave us without telling us what the last baby was. I know you love a good cliffy but thank you for not leaving us with one this time. Great chapter but Hiei and Kurama are going to need to open a day care with all those babies. Update soon.
person kerbear
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow,what a ride,and 3 babies what a surprise as well.What a troop to carry back to the demon castle,wait till everyone there sees the new additions.I hope the con was alot of fun,I always have a great time at the one thats near my home in Pittsburgh in april.I can't wait for the next chapter and what the pair will say when they have to retrian the 1st set off bottles.Great job
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
luvd it and they finally got their jewel im so happy lol. poor fox i know that was probably hell for him but he got wat he wanted his sons and his daughter. i luv this story and ur a great writer ^_^
person Harryseverus
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story you write really well and i love the relationship between the 2 boys I cant spell there names and i like how sexual hiei and kurama are please update soon i need more.
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, one down, one to go. I hope everything's alright. I can't help but wonder why Yukina was so worried. Have fun at the con. Update soon.
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am sooo happy for Kurama and Hiei. Have a good trip and I'll be waiting for your next update. And I LOVE Naruto so any stories you write about them I WILL read.
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am awe-struck. kurama giving birth naturally. he is a tough demon and i luv him more for it and hiei is just the perfect mate for him. and toushi and kaihei are so freakin' adorable. i cant wait til they get older to see how their relationship prospers. cant wait to read the next update and find out wat the other twin is and wats yukina's secret lol
person Kerbear
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your so evil stopping it there,I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next baby.Plus I think I think the boys new development and Shiori are going to be a small problem again.Great story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter,and other sequels as well.God I'm so jealous and hope you have a great time at the con.