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for OH BABY!

by ss_dragon_lady

schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, an update, and a great one at that. How the hell did you come up with enough material to make that many more stories. I have trouble making that many chapters. I for one hope you don't stop. I am impatient though so you might consider a typing class. LOL Just kidding. Update soon.
person choumaou
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello dear Dragon Lady!
I've been reading this lovely Hiei/Kurama arc since early 2005 and been captivated by it ever since. I think your the best H/K author in the Yu Yu Hakusho fandom! It's been a long time since you've last updated and I just wanted to cheer you up a little and encourage you not to give up on this story (and the other ones you've planned in this Arc)!
Lots of hugs and kisses to you! The best cooperation from your muses!
Will be waiting with my fingers crossed for future updates!
person Raholea
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... i just spent the last cuple days reading through the whole arc... and i'm only reviewing here due to the finished state of the other stories. for starts, i want to say that i'm *very* impressed with the way the whole arc turned out, the evolution of hiei and kurama's relationship, the kits, and even crossing DBZ/GT characters into it without losing anything. i admit seeing them wish kurama's mom into becoming full demon was a very nice twist and i have no doubt that she'll adjust properly, although it may take sokme time to get used to everything, because demoness or not, she still has all her human emotions and beliefs. i fell in love with all the kits, toushi and the way to little tenshi and i think it's great they finally managed to get a girl!!! she's going to be one princess that no one will ever want (or be able) to hurt. YAY!! anyways, i'll be keeping an eye out for more because i really did like the whole arc and you're doing wonderful!! keep it up!!
and one more thing... i read in here somewhere about you playing with the idea of doing a crossover with naruto... while i'd love to see how our favorite foxes (and all the kits) would interact, and i think you could pull it off rather nicely, i think it may also be a little tricky. but my full support on the idea! have fun and please, more writing!!!!
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One baby at a time was more than enough for me. I don't envy them their litter. Very sweet chapter. Hiei's such a good husband. Update soon.
person kerbear
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You hit some of the emotions for Kurama on the head and hiei will have his hands full with them for
a few days.Can't wait to see Hiei with the three ladies (with or without Kurama)boy are they in for it.
Great job as always
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoo hoo babies babies everywhere and they belong to our favorite pairings. luv u guys ^_^ though i do fell bad for the upcoming wrath that hiei will supple to ur three women. happy to not be apart of that conversation lol. and poor kurama he'll get his wish to murse his kits and hopefully they wont wear him out. cant wait to read the next chapters.
person kerbear
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow,what a great chapter and 5 new babies.Its great they got a girl to spoil.And birthing or not that was a tender and wonderful lemon.It seems Shiori might be a small problem with the way their raising their children maybe Yukina can help with some words of demon wisdom for her.It was great to see the chapter(wait or not)I didn't think I'd see one till after Christmas now.I can't wait for the next one to come,you write really well and always make it feel like your right there with them in their adventures.
Please keep up the great work.Nice job
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. A little quiet time is just what our lovers needed. Update soon.
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God it's been forever since I reviewed. Awesome chapter absolutely amazing! I love this story, and everytime I see a new chapter I grin like an idiot. Hehehehe. I know eventually one day this story will end, and I'll cry, but I know this is one of very few series I will come back to read again and again and again. Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful fic!

This chapter rocked. I love how Hiei took charge and got everyone the hell out of the way. I love Shiroi, but sometime she's going to have to realize that she can't always be there, can't always be miss helpful. Perhaps she'll realize that when she gets her love life started. Which by the way I'm hella looking forward to. I also agree with Hiei about Toushi and Kaihei... He's right, and I can't wait to see how those two end up. Hm... speaking of those two do I smell another fic focusing on those two maybe? I hope I get to see what the kids are like when they grow up, and how much different if at all Hiei and Kurama becomes. It's crazy... I've become attached to all the children as much as I am Kurama and Hiei... it's like I want to know about all of their lives now. How they handle school, and growing up as demons, who they fall in love with, their pain, their sorrows, their happiness... first kisses etc. Just comes to show how awesome a writer you are! Well I intended to leave a short review, but alas it has become much longer. Once again thank you and awesome chapter and I look forward to the next one!
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i must say i thoroughly enjoyed reading this bedtime story lol. nah but i really liked it esp. the whole bathing, kurama's one lucky fox. five babies plus toushi and kaihei our demons got their work cut out but im sure they can manage it, hell if they can handle anything, well almost anything. keep those chapters coming and also tenshi is definitely going be queen B lol ^_^