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for OH BABY!

by ss_dragon_lady

schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn.....damn.....damn.....this chapter was really cruel man. i mean he killed the fetus...*sniffles* i understand hiei's pain and kurama's. i really do hope things work out between them. this incident could ruin their mating especially he hiei cant try to forgive him. cant wait for the next update. just...damn...
person kerbear
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that last chapter was an eye opener all right.Poor Kurama not only having to live with what he did(with out thinking)and knowing Hiei has harsh words about most things(without thinking).And Poor Hiei,emotional all the way around.fixing this isn't going to be easy,Poor Shori stuck in the middle of everything.Hopefully she can help with this.This isn't going to be an easy fix ,I can't wait to see how you do this.
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I was hoping that's what was happening to Kurama. I can't wait to see Kurama as the mommy and Hiei as the proud papa. Update soon.
person XxBatsxX
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
=D I feel content with this Chapter =3 I don't think Shori has an evil plot after all... now i feel bad about thinking that =/
person ShioriFoxiesMom
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. The lemon was quite tasty. Update soon.
person fire_lilly_fox
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what is wrong with kurama? he can't be preg. too.
person comicfancat
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What nice things for Shori,wow are you really going to let Kurama have a baby as well.I hope what ever is going on with Kurama's mom isn't to bad because they both will be needing her help if Kurama is with child as well.I can't wait to see where you take this.Nicely done so far
person comicfancat
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh ok what is going on with Kurama?We know its the babies with Hiei but what about kurama and his mom.neat place for a hidding hole for the fox spoils.Hope you have a great holiday and happy new year.
person Anna (and Yura)
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can recognize those symptoms anywhere, he is pregnant I bet!
Demon foxes have the abilitie of carry child, or so japanese mythology says!
person comicfancat
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy your feeling better and Loved the new chapter.Although I can't imgine what you've got planned for poor Kurama and his mom.Both don't sound all that well,and I was kind of hoping for some peace for them for at least 2 or 3 chapters after everything they've gone through.Great job on this chapter and I look forward to the next .