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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As usual this is a remarkable story with this last chapter both expected and unexpected. I can't wait for the newest installment of the story. Update soon please.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you enough, how much I love this story arc. You are a great writer, and I love the twist and turns you put into your plot. I am sorry that Kurama had to lose one of the babies, but at least he has the other one. Their is going to be much mayhem in the castle with two children on the way! I can't wait to read more.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The last chapter was great!Chapter 9 got them back together and gave Shori an admirer.Wondering what she's going to do about it and what would Kurama have to say as well.What about her home life in human world and why she wanted to leave it for now?Is Kurama really going to keep Yomi's or his he going to find Yomi's son and talk him into taking over(maybe with Kuramas help)to keep him invalved in his father land.This is getting really good and I can't wait for the next update.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY UPDATE! I am happy to see this updated, and I really can't wait to see what happens next. Lord I'm obsessed. Anyway I want to say well done with this chapter, and the idea of Hiei and Kurama controlling that much of the Makai made me laugh and cheer. I am also happy to see them back together again. And Shori and a Demon... hmmm... I have a feeling this story is about to get even more interesting. Hope to see you update again soon! Ja Mata!
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love the way you portray the kits in this, strong and deadly even at their young age. It's cute that Shiori has an admirer too. I can't wait to see what Kurama will do when he finds our why she wanted to come with them so desperately. Update soon.
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Kurama and Hiei make an absolutely cute couple!!!
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yippy, Kurama's having a baby. I wish it were twins but I guess I can't have everything. Good chapter, update soon.
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. yayayayayay XD kurama's still preggy and hiei and him are back together XD, i was getting worried there for a second. can't wait for the next chapter so keep up the good writing.
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Theres hope is one great chapter.I'm so glad they can work through this little mess they both created for themselves.though I'm sure the first meeting with his mom and the boys will be tense for Kurama i hope it will be all right as well.
Very Nice Job
Very Nice Job
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG how could you!?! I hate it (and love it) when a story makes me cry. I understand, it flowed well that, way but still. All I can say is you'd better not leave us hanging too long and Kurmaa had better still be pregnant. He wanted that baby so much. Update soon.