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for OH BABY!

by ss_dragon_lady

person papapapuffy
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That wasn't a bad chapter at all. When I red that the poor kids was hurt I was thinking 'NOOOOOO don't kill him!!' xD I was hoping sooner of later they were going to have sex. I like that chapter and nothing was wrong with it ^^
person kerbear
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow what an ending.Though it looked like Yusuke ahd more on his mind and wouldn't say what.
I can't wait for Shiori to start anew,and look forward to the next story.
Great job as always
person Mewmew2
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for continuing to post your wonderful stories, and share your amazing writing talent with others. I shall go look for your next story of the trilogy as soon as I've posted this review. Wonderful job!
person nette
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
luved ur stories and this one especially. i cant wait for the next installment to see how everyone's relationship will grow especially toushi and kaihei. im rooting for u two guys whoooo lol ^^ great writing as always
person 66Hiei08
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This has indeed been an intriguing series. As one who has started my own series of YYH stories, only three so far with another nearly ready to be submitted, I salute you! You are indeed my inspiration! :o)
person Cat
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!
And now I'm going over to read the new one.
:D
Keep up the great work!!
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely awesome, as alway. I loved Hiei's speach to Kuwabara. Mutual respect is the best those two should ever have to keep true to their nature. I'm looking forward to reading the next installment.
person Cat
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:( Aren't you going to post the last chapter?? It's been a while..... Just wondering.. Cause I absolutely love reading the arc and I'm hoping you aren't going to just abandon it...
Anyways, I'll keep waiting, and hopefully you'll post the chapter soon and start on the other stories for the arc you mentioned. :)
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!
:D
person MewMew2
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You've done a wonderful job in continuing to post your arcs and for this I thank you. The fact is that some of us are still hanging in there and reading your stories, I'm sorry that you feel that us reviewers have abandon you. That isn't the case (at least for me). If you find yourself having trouble updating due to lack of time, then feel free to contact me so that I may post for you, or simply help you out during a road block or in making a decision. Just email me at napsterkitten5'AT'gmail.com
person Korbin
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You finally updated! I've been dying to read the next chapter of your story and it seemed like forever, but now its here and what a wonderful chapter it is! ^_^ Oh, I'm so happy for the two of them. They're the perfect family!

And what's this I hear about you giving up on your stories. Oh, hell no! You shall continue to write because you're an amazing writer and if no one else will, then I'll definitely read them all. So please, don't give up! I'll give you a cookie. *waves chocolate chip cookie*