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what happens after that.

I really don't like that Hiei is keeping things from Yusuke, that is only going to create more problems down the road and shit like that usually pisses Yusuke off.

Botan is such a lucky woman, hearing the headboard bang against the wall like that. And HO FUCK THE SEX SCENE WAS HOT. Once again, you're the master (or mistress, whatever you prefer). Gods, please continue this!

i love your hiei and yusuke stories. i cant wait to see what hiei has planned. looking foward to your update whenever that maybe.

Oh, I love Hiei/Yusuke smex! That was so hot, next time put me in the middle and we'll be good to go. Hell I'll even settle for being on the sidelines with the camcorder. What are they going to be able to do about a spirit on the loose? Let him kill Kuwabara or Koenma not Yusuke though. Keep up the good work!

Hiei is such a bad ass. I just love him. No one fucks with his Yusuke! I say he feeds stupid Botan to the spirit, lol. Ohhhh and Hiei taking control over Yususke in bed was hot!!!!!! This story is once again (I seem to say 'once again' when referring to your stories all the time ^_^) exceptionally creative. It would be funny to see Yusuke tease Hiei in front of Botan and I wouldn't even mind a quick lemon with Shizuru and Kurama. I always thought that Shizuru would make a good 'het' match for Kurama. Also, another Hiei/Yusuke fuck scene would be drool worthy. ^_~

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I like this fic, good start! I like a protective hiei!

You know, I remember KHL telling me over the phone about how your plots are always inventive and I've never felt that her statement was wrong. This is another twisted plot that makes me keep the faith in fanfiction. Props for using the Mirror of Utter Dark and the scene where Yusuke was possessed by its spirit was gut wrenching.

Write more! Don't make me come down there and spank you AGAIN.

Nice start, it isn't often I see the mirror featured so prominately in a fanfic. I wonder just what is going to happen, I can't imagine it being good with that mirror ivolved. LOL, but I'm sure you will find a way. Please update soon.

i love it keep going