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for Peanut Butter Lemon Soufflé

by Blossomwitch

schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally getting around to reading more of your stuff. LOVED this one...I don't think peanut butter will ever look innocent to me again...
person Lici
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMGosh!

I loved this! And the ending . . .
PRICELESS! Absolutely fantastic!
Thank you for a great read.
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm. Yummy. Imay never look at peanut butter quite the same way again, but I do feel the need to write some food erotica. (Nice food erotica, the sensual stuff you have here - not my last disturbing delve into that world.) It was really hot and I could picture them in my mind. Who am I kidding? I am STILL picturing them in my mind!!

Is it just wrong that I wondered at least four times during this fic how Kurama keeps his shape eating that much peanut butter? No offense meant by that! It's just that I could picture them so clearly and as I did that little question kept popping up. (And then getting completely ignored byt he images of the peanut butter-covered, writhing fire demon being licked by the kitsune. I think I have to read that again!!!)

Very nicely done. I think I shall always keep a spare jar of peanut butter on hand from now on - for inspiration!
person shiori_foxies_mom@yahoo.com
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A great lemon is the best way to wish someone a happy birthday. I already read in her journal how much Blue Utopiah loved this. I have to agree with Kurama, I just love a little peanut butter with my Hiei.
person shiori_foxies_mom@yahoo.com
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A great lemon is the best way to wish someone a happy birthday. I already read in her journal how much Blue Utopiah loved this. I have to agree with Kurama, I just love a little peanut butter with my Hiei.
person janik
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing one-shot! It may surprise you to know that I have never tried peanut butter, though I will certainly be doing so, if only to know what Kurama was tasting >:D