rate_review Reviews

That was sad, horrible, scary, and somehow beautiful. Well, not beautiful...perhaps...haunting? That's probably a better word.

That is to say that it was wonderful, but in a horribly creepy way. It's hard to explain what I mean, but I'm pretty sure you got the effect you wanted.

I honestly don't think I've ever cried so much while reading a single story... This was trully an emotional rollercoaster, and a beautiful work of literary art.

Now if you'll excuse me....*sniffles, gabing box of tissues and favorite kurama episode while heading to bedroom.*

P.S. I don't know if you received my e-mail or not, but I have started a group on Myspace dedicated to Yaoi writers, and I'd love for you to be one of the first members...it's not much to look at yet, but check it out if you want...

http://groups.myspace.com/AFFYaoiAssociation

-Thanks!

Raine

Can I ask something? What's 'Kowareta' mean? If you decide to let me know, you won't be able to e-mail me, because it's screwed up...somehow... Anyway...

Great.../sniffle/ Now you've got me all teary-eyed! But that's a good thing, because this is probably...no...it IS the best angst-centered story I've read on almost any site! Poor Kurama...but I love the way you've done this. I wasn't too big on the death thing, but yah, you warned me. This story is awesome! Not many people can pull something like this off, but you did perfectly! Thanks!

~colorless egyptian

Beautiful...absolutely beautiful. I think this may be one of the most wonderful and dark fanfictions that I have ever read. Your style is absolutely magnificent, your word choice is astounding and you truly know how to grip an audience and hold them until the final phrase. I applaud you. You are defintely one of my new favorite fanfiction writers.

and for those who are curious, I believe kowareta means "broken" in Japanese. At least I'm fairly certain.

That was so good and so sad. I'm almost crying right now, but you did warn me. You have a beautiful way with words and your originality is incredible. I'm very impressed. There were points when I could actually feel my stomach churning and I curled my legs up to my chest, but call me a masochist, those are the kind of stories I like. The ones where you can feel what the character is going through. I look foreword to more of your stories. ^-^

Wow. That was powerful. I'm actually reduced to crying. Although I can't relate to Kurama'a predicament exactly I can relate to some parts. Some people are twisted...and to think that those twisted people are allowed to walk free when their victims are left in a torrent of self-hate that eventually leads to their death...in Kurama's case he was lead BACK to his death in Karasu's wake. It just completely hit me hard.

Uhm, no hints towards a Hiei/Kurama relationship?!?! Haha, really this is such a good story. I was going to time myself on how fast I could read it but my Internet turned off halfway through. I had to wait a whole night till I could read it! Do you know how much pain I was in?! Well you should be happy:) I could never write like this. I'm always too scared to use a certain name too many times. Like instead of using Kurama you use fox or something interesting...when I do that I end up using fox more then his name, which makes it shitty. Great angst though! It's stories like these I will take tips and notes on.

I seriously have tears on my cheeks right now. That was incredible... so many have tried, yet so few achieved the K/K you have...

I said it before, you actually managed to squick me with this. Especially with the vegetables. And the vials. The marker thing, more than anything else, kind of hit me with just how broken Kurama was at the end. And the reactions of his friends and family, especially Shiori and Hiei, were also painful as well as in-character for the situations.

Yeah, I wanted to review here too. I repeat everything I said in the journal. The vegetable idea was completely original; it was great, etc. I also like that part in the beginning about the wine. The way it was described and...(damn, I'm not good with words!) I just loved that whole paragraph. It was interesting and, again, very creative.
I love characters with mental disorders. I love psychological torture. That is why I enjoyed this fic. I fully enjoyed the breaking down of Kurama. That's as blunt as I can say it. This is why an 'insane, homicidal Yukina' fanfic would really interest me. I understand that you can't write it now, but maybe in the future (1 year, 3 years, I can wait). I would love to see your homicidal Yukina.

Sincerely Mea aka yaoi_lover00 ^_^