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for Haunted By An Unfulfilled Desire

by ryukotsusei

person Tin Can
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see the next chapter <3.
person gettogoth
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow nice i like how u put that k thought dat she waz a lez and in the anime she really is lol and i like how u have eveything set up get'n den durnk nice move now she'll b more willin ne wayz keep t up add a new cap soon i wanna c how dis turns out
person Iron Man
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was a long chapter!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!!
person Mariah
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome! You made few if any grammatical or spelling errors and the story itself is progressing nicely. Good job.
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah I'm dying to see how you finish this, this is a great start, very hot.
person Imp
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is getting interesting hasn't? Very interesting indeed. Update in the near future.*starts manically laughing* I'm kidding I like the fic so far though.
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you write this pairing, and am enjoying this story very much. I am eagerly looking forward to some hot luving, you write lemons very well, very smexy.
person ursan-canine
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
now that was a cliffhanger. T.T
person Kimisan (NSI)
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent first chapter, Shizuru is one of my favorite characters. I'll be looking forward to see how this plays out. Can't blame her for dreaming of Hiei. The height difference is funny but that just means he can go to his knees to get the job done. = )

Look forward to the next update, Keep up the good work. *Hands you Aoshi cookies*