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for Koorime Litter

by saiyanb

schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I certainly wish I was Hiei in that first chapter, I would never argue with Koenma, Yusuke, and Kurama visiting me at night! But seriously, this story is freaking adorable! I could see Hiei curled up with all the eggs, and the thefts are definitely going to catch up with the crew. I'm enjoying this alot and I'm so glad you're posting more of your fics here!
person Diane
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it & can hardly wait for the next chapter, in which the eggs will hopefully hatch & the readers can see the results of the egg thefts.
person kit-kit
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh wow it seems hiei sure has 9 kids by different people. tomorrow should be very intersting
person Anon
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ehh its entertaining but really... not all that good considering its eggs... -.-; demons don't hatch eggs.....
person XxBatsxX
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha that was cute =3 i would die if i had all those kids though xDDD
person Kita
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wahaha~! ^^;; This one made me chuckle. What with how Koenma, Yuusuke and Kurama are completely -oblivious- to the fact Hiei's in heat! Also, I like how you drew out the hours, too--two for Koenma because he 'had to work', three for Yuusuke because he can 'take more', and four for Kurama because -technically- it was 'two people'. ^^;;; Heh! Quite amusing, really~ Again, I'm glad you've got some new fics. ^^ I've only read The Mekai War and Dreams, as of yet... x.x;; I have no luck finding you on other sites, so I'll just wait for the next installment, ne? ^^;;;; Hiei waking up with Kurama right next door after this wild night should be iiinteresting~ :3 Jaa!

Peace! Keep writing~!

-Kita
person nette
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter, it was funny having keiko chase yusuke around and kurama switching his forms. oh and kuwa's mantra for the eggs to absorb yukina's ki. it was just a good chapter. can't wait for you to update.
person bob
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty funny...and hot update I want to see the consequences
person Vix
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I absolutely loooove your story and I beg for you to write more...pleeeaaaasse?!?!? I can't wait!
Vix ^-^
person Tori
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was quality!