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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are such an amazing writer! I'm not a huge fan of Kurama/Sniper, but Kurama and almost any guy works for me. You worked this out so well. And you managed to make Sniper's own personality - which I always thought was a bit like Yusuke's - show through. I so knew he'd be the dom. And exceedingly happy that he was! That was really just too hawt!!
Only thing that bothered me, really, was your changing between the nouns "boy" and "man". I think you should choose which one you're going to use instead of switching. Especially in the middle of paragraphs.
Update soon!
Only thing that bothered me, really, was your changing between the nouns "boy" and "man". I think you should choose which one you're going to use instead of switching. Especially in the middle of paragraphs.
Update soon!
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn you have a way of making me feel better. This was hot, I rather liked seeing these two together. Makes me wonder what's going to happen after his vacation time is up and what Yusuke and Hiei would think about his choice of bedpartners lol I look forward to reading more, *sends you naked hiei cookies* Keep up the good work.
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh wow a weird pairing but i like it
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that that is the best one i have ever read with Hiei, yusuke and kurama together
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful lemon, I'm glad the boys got everything worked out between them. And yes please, write that Kurama/Akabane/Ban lemon please! *Sends you naked hiei cookies*
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You owe me a new brain, mine broke while I was reading this. Wow - you made Kurama the super hawt uke, I love that he got passsed around. Please tell me that there will be more of these!
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow im glad that the three-some worked out for them.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty freakin hot! I so can't wait to read the rest of them!
And this isn't really a criticism because I like what you did, but for the first time I could have done without Hiei in that picture. I was actually rooting for Yusuke, which is unusual. But still, this was hella hot! Great job!
And this isn't really a criticism because I like what you did, but for the first time I could have done without Hiei in that picture. I was actually rooting for Yusuke, which is unusual. But still, this was hella hot! Great job!
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was oh so hot. It might be too much to wish that these will all be threesomes but any combination of the three is hot too. Update soon.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was too hot and the ending was too cute. i'll defintely be sticking around for more. that Kurama/Ban/Akabane pairing kinda caught my eye. i prefer ginji over ban though. *big ginji/akabane fan* anywho, great work.