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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I also like how you had Keiko's cat hiss in chapter 3 and I couldn't stop thinking about a one shot with Kuwabara calling her 'kitten'. Its one of my favorite sex names as it is both endering and naughty. I wonder if you would consider giving Kuwabara a shot as I think his physic abilty to touch minds (like with Yukina) could be naughty but with his romantic sweetness, maybe some sweet cheer-up-sex. I love this series.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked both chapters & am looking forward to more. Just as a FYI type thing, I think Kurama's stepbrothers name in the dub is Kokota, I much prefer them having the same name to that although I didn't know about the slight spelling difference between the 2.
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome length and detail. though kind of sucks that his family died. so whats going to happen to keiko? the lemons were really hot as well. keep up the good work and can't wait for the second part
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh this was sooo naughty, I loved the yummy dirty talk. Very hot sex scenes. And the plot is amazing I like the use of past charcters. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hiei's a naughty demon I swear... Yusuke's going to be left to wonder just what the hell happened to her for their date. Hopefully he doesn't come to her house and see something he shouldn't. Hmm pairing requests you say? I think a Yusuke/Keiko/Hiei could be fun to read. Good chapter, can't wait to read more. Update soon please.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is always a favorite pairing of mine. I love how naughty you make Hiei, very hot. Good job once again.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I almost forgot I would love to see Keiko with Jin, he's so fun loving. Maybe even a 3 some with Jin and Shizuru, her more stoic side and Keiko's studiousness both could use a shot of fun from someone like Jin. Maybe a quick frolick during the time around the Dark Tournament? Thank you very much for taking the time to share your wonderful talent with us poor hentai readers.