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for Please, Can I?

by ss_dragon_lady

schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i was rereading your stories and realized that in " all three world's" you said kayko was yusukes wife and in this story he proposes? I thought I would let you know!
person XxBatsxX
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY happy ending!!! that so rocked! =D whooo~
person comicfancat
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good,very nice story and very well done.
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I really liked that first part of the chapter ^^. Very interesting. Now I'm intersted in reading the other story you wrote. I'm not a huge fan of Hiei/Kurama, but I like how you keep everyone in character, and I haven't seen any kind of Kuwa-bashing so I'll go check it out ^^. I thougth you did a really great job writing this out and you certainly got my attention ^^. I can't wait to read the next chapter ^^. Keep up the awesome work! ^^
person shiori_foxies_mom@yahoo.com
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kuwabara. He won't stand a chance to ever beat Hiei. Some how I'll bet Hiei finds a way to lose with dignety in the end. I'm glad to see this arc continue, I just love it. Update soon.
person XxBatsxX
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aw, poor kuwa.. xDD Hiei still is a bad ass though Hahaha I didnt really want to read this until you finished your other fic, but the allure was crazy =D Whooo~ a week is to long =3
person comicfancat
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter,you always knew Hiei would make Kewa suffer just a little for his sister.