rate_review Reviews

wow i loved this story i loved how hiei during the whole series was a kid(i always wondered why he was so small) and then he grew up after. i loved how you had keiko not wait for yusuke because in the series if he hadn't of came when he did keiko would have stop waiting for him and also got rid of the conflict that would of come if she did.

Awesome fucking story. I was a little worried at first that this was going to be another 'one of the guys gets thrown in the dungeon with a teammate, and then one gets hits with lust spell, they fuck and that's it.' Now where that isn't totally a bad thing ^_~ It's been done to death. So it was refreshing that you really changed things up. I loved the way you wove Hiei's past into the story causing conflict with his feelings for Yusuke. Even though he was terrified, Hiei still helped Yusuke through the spell. Then, you had Hiei remove Yusuke's memory of the incident. How selfless of Hiei not wanting Yusuke to be burdened with guilt and also not intruding into Yusuke's and Keiko's relationship. It was smart that you thought of Hiei waiting it out until Keiko's death or to see if Keiko waited for Yusuke for him to maybe reveal his feelings to Yusuke. Also, having Hiei still a child was great. It explains a few things, I think. And then to have him come back as a grown up bishy, well, you had my heart singing. Who could resist the firebrat, not Yusuke.

I thought it a stroke of genius having those fucking thieves from Hiei's past come back wanting to hurt Hiei all over again. But, I knew that Yusuke would come to the rescue.

I just love a happy ending. Yay for Yusuke and the firebrat.

Oh and I loved that Kurama and Shizuro (sp) hooked up. And that Kuwa and Yukina hooked up with kids (a little orange headed Hiei) too cute and funny. And then the whole birth control bit was funny as well. I loved Kurama in this. You had him lighten up bit, lol. I've been reading a lot of awesomely written dark Kurama fics, which I love, but this was a nice distraction from those.

Great job. I'll be looking for more of your writings that are Yusuke centered ^_^

Love and Kisses
KHL