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this is great!!!!!!love it!!

Uwaaaahhh!! This is just one of the most fantastic YusukexHiei story ever! You really make it happen. Isn't Hiei the most lovable, bestest, cutest lil uke in the whole world? *cries while biting keyboard*

It's really lovely how you made Hiei a kid in the fic who blossoms into a fine young man. And Yusuke's steady but surely developing love for him is teh bomb! And your love scenes are really hot! Wish I can write hot stuff like that. *cries*

Thank you for posting this. I've been a fan of yours since I read Koorime Litter. The guys just can't get enough of uke-Hiei. Woohoo!!!

Keep up the wonderful, great, fantastic job!

great story! it was wonderful! i was wondering if you could maybe make a sequel for this one where Hiei gets pregnant? you don't have too, but it would be very nice if you did! :) i don't normally like Yusuke/Hiei pairings but you did a great job! this is one of the only stories (plus all of your other ones!) that i really like with this pairing. my favorite pairing is Kurama/Hiei! :)

That was sooooo cool!! I loved it a LOT!!!!!

Ahhh, it's so good to see something new from you! ^^ A very nice Hiei/Yuusuke fic, and it was such a surprise to see new fics on your profile! ...I've been a fan of The Meikai War for a few years, so now that I know you're still active I'll go review that, too~! -^^- Lovely little fic you've got, here. Thanks for the new material! It's as well-written and excellently planned out as ever~! :3

it was so good you should write more!

You definitely have a great story here I hope you update. There are a few spelling errors but other than that it really was great. I'm not trying to be a butthole or anything but I think you should ahve made that chapter into more than one so it would flow better. Other than that I loved it. I liked Hiei's dance... instead of fire baby it was fire dancer.... anyway keep writing because you have talent.

You know, I did a little dance when I realized that you posted another story. I'm a big fan of Dreams and The Meikai War, and I know that you had other fics, but I hadn't seen them. This was amazing, really epic. I could sense the quiet hurt that Hiei was going through, and you have a way of just writing a simple sentence that conveys all of Hiei's pain in a manner that tugs at my heart. Also, you write some smoking lemons: I think my brain broke when Yusuke told Hiei that he was going to touch him everywhere. Really, too much to comment on, besides the incredibly creative idea of the Dragon moving to Hiei's back, I loved Kurama and Shizuru ogling the newly developed Hiei, the entire scene where Hiei was dancing and chanting by the hopsital, and how Yusuke's memory came back to him in flashes.

Really well done, I hope you post more.

This is the best story I have ever read!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!1

OMFG!!! i love this one!!! haha. for real. i've read this in makai black market before... OMG! please put up Forbidden Love soon!!! thank you so much! :D :D