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Adorabl ^^

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I like the over all concept and idea. Though when you finally get to the love scene things seem to become a little rushed. Also maybe try to avoid using their names so often and less fragment sentences, it makes for an easier and more enjoyable read.

This was just too cute. And hot too...don't forget hot. *Sigh* I need a Jagan about as much as Hiei needs a vacation.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ::Falls out of her chair laughing:: This story was great... absolutely great! I do hope you write what happens when Hiei gets his vacation. Not only was the story extremely sexy, but it had some hilarious tones to it where I could do nothing more than laugh. I was extremely shocked when it turned out to be a dream. Wonderful job!

Hee hee! That was amusing as hell!! I loved the entire thing! Only, you had a few grammar errors. Still, great job!!