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Love it!

I love it!

Good story. Keep it up. Love the ending comment Keiko made! Nice one!

"I'm sorry" doesn't even to begin to make up for Kurama's actions in "My Mistake." I hope he does get the chance to begin to make amends, but I would understand completely if Keiko decides otherwise. Hiei had the right idea to let Keiko decide what should happen to Kurama. A beating by Yuusake would have assuaged Kurama's guilt. A very moving and thought provoking piece. I look forward to seeing what future pieces are about.

Wow. This would be one medium size fanfic for others to develop and write, but you put it out as an incredible oneshot. A wife of convenience was an interesting approach to get Keiko and Kurama together. The development of love and making the relationship real was wonderfully done.
I like the fact that each of the pieces that I have read that puts Keiko and Kurama together keeps them in character so well and that Keiko doesn't suddenly lose her backbone. Well Done.

You! Cruel person! OMG I have tears in my eyes. I really enjoyed that. Not a lot of happy times, and I'm a great K/K fan, but nevertheless there were things there that haven't really been touched on in any fanfics I've read before- most people write that as long as there's love anything can be forgiven, but that's not always the reality of the situation. All that sadness over a misunderstanding! And Keiko never even found out why he did it - not that it should make any difference.
Kurama really is a cruel bastard.

Kurama can be an absolute ass sometimes. I love to see it. Glad things worked out in the end, nicely done on the details. Can't wait to read more, update soon please.

You know, as a rule I never read het...never. But I want to let you know that this story, or this series of one shots is SO GOOD, that it actually got me to read het. That's a tribute to how great an author you are - you make believers out of the non-believers. Seriously, this is so well written that I was riveted by both chapters, especially the second one.

I don't know what else to say...I'm stunned, really. Please, keep writing, you have a wonderful grasp on Kurama, and I love when he leans more toward his dominating cold Youko form. You do him wonders.

Again, very well written. *appaluse*

Very well done first chapter, it's always nice to see Kurama's dark side come out. Can't wait to read more, update soon please.

Wow. FUCKING AMAZING STORY. I WAS GLUED TO EVERY WORD. I CRIED AT THE END FOR BOTH OF THEM. I'VE NEVER BEEN BROUGHT TO TEARS OVER ANYTHING I HAVE EVER READ, UNTIL NOW. THANK YOU FOR SUCH REAL STORY WITH REAL CONSEQUENCES. I'M AT A LOSS FOR WORDS. BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!