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i really hope yusuke forgives kurama. Great story.

Update soon!

wow kurama is in heat and about to get it on with hiei...i really hope yusuke comes home quick.

ok it was about damn time you updated. i was getting tired of threatening you to do so. i still think your doing a great job. jake told me to tell you he said hi and he likes your story too. the next time i tell you that chapt 8 was good don't wait six months to type it then ask me to read again and again and again and again. now are we clear on that subject. it was great and i do not appreciate an evil cliffy like that. there is no fun in that. where is the lemon or even the lime (sighs). ok. now i know you said no threats but here is one anyway. update or everyone will suffer. sorry had the ring moment.

ps lala la la, lala la la, elmo's world.

lmao later.

YEAH!!!!!!!!!

An Update.

I've been following this story since the beginning. Hehe...Kurama's in heat, Rando broke out and now attempted rape by Hiei. Could this story get any better!!!!

Though I hope Yusuke makes back on time, and Rando gets to have so fun with Kurama and Yusuke. (I'm obbessed with Rando with anyone pairing, Though I love Rando and Kuwabara pairings. Rambling ~.~)

Great Up Date. Keep them comming.

Touchmysoul

Damn....you're evil hahahaha. Poor Kurama!!! Yusuke's gotta get there...or Kuwabara...or at least SOMEONE...other then Rando...hope he doesn't come; and why did he escape? Could he be out for some revenge on Yusuke? Or maybe wanting to finish off Kuwabara? Or ruin Yusuke's life; like Keiko? Hahaha. You can do so much with this; that it's not even funny!! Ok it is but still ^^; I loved it! You got me on the edge of my seat! Please up date soon!! ^_^

It's 2 in the morning, but like I promised I caught up!!! Read all the chapters I missed. Wasn't as many as i thought there would be. So it was wonderul!! Man that bathroom scene was just plan hot!! I love what you're doing with this. It's just amazing how complicated it's getting and one character after another is coming in. I wonder how Koenma's gonna take it tha Kurama's plant killed a guy ^^; Also....WHERE IS KUWA-CHAN?!! Though I'm glad you mentioned him at least ^^.Anyway, I can't wait for Hiei 's reaction to this whole thing and I wonder who you will pair him up, I mean come on, he doesn't have anyone now. *hint hint* Anyway, awesome job and can't wait to read more ^_^

as always you continue to do a god job all thanks to my superior beta-ing skills. although, i did find it disgusting when you had kurama put yusuke's anal juices on yusuke's stomach when he placed his finger on the boys stomach after it was in his ass then kiss and suck his stomach. ewwww. anyway. so hurry up and type the next chapter. and tell ppl to read my story. or i wont forgive you for 'you know what'.

wow i loved the sex scene and im finally glad that i found out the reason why yusuke and keiko broke up.

ok i have been thinking of who you can have hiei pair up with. here is a few. you could have him pair up with touya. i know how you love him and i can't think of any stories that had a hiei and touya pairing. they both seemed to have that cold and lonely type exterior. they would make a cute couple doncha think. touya could teach hiei a few ice tricks all the while hiei could heat up things in the bedroom. and for another person to have hiei hook up with...............................our beloved JIN. *swoons* need i say more. ok for the final. i think he would look cute with botan. so what ya think. if you don'tlike the ideas, i don't care. was just trying to help you out. any ways, i still like the way this is turning out so..... adios