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by koorimesbabygurl

person Hemamal
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yea, finally some action!! I really wish I was in Yusuke's place, but who doesn't!!
person Hemamal
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! Swing it Baby!! Love the pic of Kurama and Yusuke dancing together.
person Liquorish
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What up? Wondering if this was going to be updated soon? It's one of my favorite stories, so I want to see how it plays out. Seriosly though, suspense sucks. LOL.
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is better than watching a soap opera! Please keep it up, I have got to know how this turns out!
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY COW! Its a wonder the whole Makai ain't a ghost town with those pregnancy aliments. . . God passing out and projectile vomit *tear* I'm so proud of you ^_^! I can't wait to hear Kurama's explination to his mother about that pink plus and what is YUSUKE going to think. . .is it his turn to pass out next?? Oh please let Yusuke pass out!!! LOL!! Great chapet can't wait for the next!!!
person Liquorish
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One of my fav! Update soon please!
person kwildr
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great i love that kurama is pg but it would be even cooler if they both end up pregnant around the same time it would make the storie more intresting and itd already one of the best.
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent. I so needed some some great writing and a nice juicy lemon all ready. Thank you. A pregnant Kurama should be interesting. But I wonder if Yusuke is the father or Hiei. I really hope its Yusuke. Thanks again for the fresh update, we certainly needed something decent to read. Updates are getting few and far between on AFF.

Love and Kisses
Kogas Hentai Luver
person kitkit
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow kurama is pregnant
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh, Harry Potter--I took one of those little HP-induced hiatuses myself--from the entire Internet (I didn't want to stumble across any spoilers).

Chapter wasn't bad, although Hatanaka's given name is Kazuya, not Ken; and one wonders just why Kurama would have a pregnancy test in his bathroom to begin with--but I'm nit-picking, I know! It was overall good and entertaining, and I'll be lurking here in wait for the next chapter ^_^