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person Victor
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHoa! I've certainly missed alot, lol. Although i haven't read up to the most recent chapter as of yet, the story is still as...hmm, how do i say? I'd say it's a "raunchy" as ever. I'm currently at Ch.11 but i'll try to keep up-to-date from now on, lol. Nice as always Nette
person kit-kit
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow kurama preggie
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, here are the two reasons why you win this chapter: 1) You portrayed Mukuro as something other than a petty bitch, something that many stories featuring her as a minor character leave wanting, and 2) You actually applied anatomy and medical terms instead of just some Well they hooked up and now he's somehow pregnant! fairy tale sort of scenario.

Oh, and a bonus, in that Yusuke and Hiei actually worked quite civilly together instead of falling into infantile bickering--so all in all, a brilliant chapter good author!
person Hemamal
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn hormones!! Poor Kurama! What a time to go into heat!!
person Hemamal
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How is Yusuke going to except that!! I hope when he was actually telling Yusuke what happen he didn't go into that much detail!
person Hemamal
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't like the fact that Yusuke hit my Kurama, but I love the punishment/make up sex!! But what will Hiei think!!
person Hemamal
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off why the hell does Kurama have a pregnacy test! Secondly, how is Yusuke going to take himself being a daddy. And lastly WHAT THE HELL!!!! I feel so sorry for Kurama.
person Hemamal
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet of Yusuke to get Kurama a plushy!! I wish I had plushy Kurama fox!
person Hemamal
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naughty, naughty! Very hot, I wish I was in that tunnel of love!!!
person Hemamal
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gosh!! I know they say if you can't stand the heat get out of the kitchen, but the restaurant!!!