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Wow! A threesome. I can't wait.

I like how your story is progressing so far, though I do hope Ryuu finally gets the picture that he's hurting Hiei. Well, until next time.

My, my, my...I'm absolutely loving this. Like seriously. I just love how Ryuu is...even if he is a bit young-mentally, that makes him all the more interesting and innocent. And oohh! I can't wait to see the drama unfold with Ryuu and Kurama over Hiei...I actually had an idea like this, but it was Youko vs. Kurama(shuichi) over Hiei, but Hiei only wanted Kurama(not the demon Kurama), so Youko was like 'I'lltake him anayway'. But I ahven't had time to type the fic, and now, I won't need too...I have your fic, which is, so far, sounding better and better by the chapter...

Update soon, please!
P.S.-Poor Hiei...perhaps he should suggest(or buy, somehow) some lube for Ryuu...Also, I would gladly beta for you, but just so you know, I don't have Microsoft Word, so I'll have to use my cheaper version os MW...either way, I didn't find too many errors(if any) in this chapter...you're doing fine(Great!) without a beta...keep up the work..amatuer or not, this is fabulous!!

It's lovely, really, thought sometime Hiei or Ryuu, need to realize that he isn't supposed to bleed, hehe.

aw, poor Hiei, he cant get off with Ryu ;o;... Has he even reached puberty in your fic ._.?

Interesting. Never quite read a fic like this, but I'm glad I came upon it. Well, do add another chapter or two to it. Please.

I Like this. Especially Ryuu... he has so much power, and he's conscious of it, but he's so naive as to not notice he's caused Hiei pain. It's cute...

I want to read more, update soon!

I love the plot, but if i may make a suggestion about the dragon's personality. He seems to be a little too child-like. It just doesn't seem like how a dragon from the depths of hell would act. I hope i'm not sounding to bitchy, but it was just a thought.

WOW!!! I love this, it's such a cool story!!!!!!! And I love how the powerful Black Dragon has a child's mentality.

Hahaha, that was great! =D But im worndering, is this story only about Hiei and his dragon or kurama too?..... @_@?