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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, Hokeshin's just too damned perverted for his own good. They better watch themselves, the bald dude might install a smut cam so he doesn't get busted for peeping. Looking forward to more, update soon please.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that dream in the beginning was rough, it made me twitch a little - but take that as a compliment, that means you're a good author. The sex scene was amazing, I didn't expect Hiei to become uke after he took Yusuke...and the peeping Hokeshin was amusing. Keep up the good work!
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i love the chapter for a minute i though hiei had sex with keiko and yusuke caught them when you was telling the dream, because of that i nearly had a heart attack lol. anyway i can't wait for the next chapter, though i wonder if you will make a 2nd part to the 2nd chapter, the way you ended it made me believe that a 2nd part was coming.
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another hot chapter even if it was a bit shorter than the last on. Now you have to do one where Yusuke goes looking for Hiei. Update soon.
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoooo hoooo! Awesome first part, I don't blame Yusuke for wanting to molest sleeping fire apparitions. I would too. Now Yusuke needs to get off his butt and go after him. Can't wait to read more, please update soon. *sends plate of naked Hiei cookies*
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And there goes my brain...That scene with Hiei and Yusuke was unbelievably hot. I agree with Ryuko - I don't blame Yusuke for molesting a sleeping jaganshi either!...I would've done alot worse to him anyway. Heh.
Really though, this was very hot. Well done. I can't wait to see more!
Really though, this was very hot. Well done. I can't wait to see more!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooohh i loved this story i can't wait for the next chapater
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn Yusuke is an insensitive jerk at times isn't he? Glad everything got worked out between them though, Puu was especially cute in helping to keep Kurama in one place. Update soon please!
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. Very hot too. Too bad for Keiko but I'm glad she took it with dignity. I can't wait for the next installment in this. If Kurama and Yusuke are hot when it's Hiei's turn then the page might just set fire. Update soon.