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Kurama and Keiko ... in a collection of oneshots.... Oh I foresee a good amount of reading to enjoy in my future. I like how they got together in Chapter 1. It's a nice use of the disguised lover myth. Thankfully you make Keiko aware enough that she doesn't delude herself that it is Yuusake with her. [I could never understand how some people could believe that.] Keiko had every reason to think that leaving was her best option. I really enjoyed how the miscommunication to protect themselves (Kurama with his stoic appearance and Keiko with her crying and fleeing) was resolved. Very nice. I like the added touch of Kurama questioning himself and Keiko's feelings on the train. Very humanizing. Keep up the awesome work.

"Her Sacrafice" is my favorite so far. Excellant development and denial of feelings to create the climax (physical and storyline) that impresses everyone. I loved the fact that 'work' forced Kurama and Keiko to deal with their feelings for each other. And Yuusake's reaction to seeing them together is exactly how I think he would react in that situation after he and Keiko had split. Hiei was the only one aware enough to know what was going to happen and Yuusake and Kurama would have done everything in their power to stop Keiko from acting on her own. As if she could kill one of those two. The twist at the end to make Keiko the new ferry girl for the permenant spirit detectives was an excellant treat. [I can just imagine how this storyline would develop.]
Oh, before I forget. I don't know if it was intentional or not but sacrifice is spelled with an 'i.'

Goodness talk about tempting the beast. At first I thought that Kurama overreacted to the situation, but not so much once he admitted to wanting Keiko for months and her dance being the final straw. Keiko's issue with being Yuusake's ex would definitely cause problems. No one would be willing to poach in that territory because they are still friends and he would interfere even more than he did with Kurama. I loved the final touch of having Keiko's mother call to be answered by kurama like that. I wonder if they will succeed in convincing her what she thinks is happening really isn't. Wonderful job. Please keep it up. Your work is a delight to read.

Oh man, Keiko's in some serious trouble now lol Maybe she can pass it off as they were busy with homework but I doubt it lol Good chapter, I look forward to reading more. Update soon please.

You always pull up some of the best plots I've seen, one shot or otherwise. Another wonderful story. Since you were so gracious to send Kazuki my way for the night, I wanted to let you know Akabane is on his way over to submit to your every desire. Have fun!

Kurama/Keiko rules man. Really underrated. Oh yeah, and this story kicks some major @$$
You should really continue

Glad to see that they got it straightened out. Wonderful one shot, I look forward to reading more of them. Update soon please. *sends plate of naked Hiei cookies*

Awww that was so sweet and cute I really liked it. I enjoyed your base for the reason of the break up very nice. The sex scene was realistic and hot very good job, I liked the made to fit line. I liked the insight to the characters and how you continued this from the end of the series. Very good story line, the only thing you might want to look at is after he removed her panties I think it should be something like 'writhing' not 'withering'. Gotta love spell checks quirky sense of humor. I really enjoyed how you have the ending, the angst was sweet. And Yusuke's line about blowing up the engine was funny. I could see more with this story line but am very happy with this one shot. I love this pairing and am happy to see you doing this story grouping.