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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that's just soooooooooo good. I absolutely love it. Hope you will write another chapter soon. I really loved that part when Yusuke was comforting Kurama. It was just so sweet. Not like my brother right now bitching at me to let him on computer.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
*Jumps up and down* KURAMA IN CHAINS!!! LEMME AT HIM! *Drools* *Normal Raine comes in with baseball bat, beats down psycho oaku, and packs her back in her box. Puts on glasses and turns round to speak as "educated" Raine.*
Sorry about that psycho-babbling spaz...she's my other self...she breaks out every now and then. Anyway....
Excellent story so far! For not having a beta there weren't too many mistakes either, though I did sot a few. If you would like a beta, I would be happy to do it. My e-mail is on my profile.
I love the spin you are putting on the story, I can't wait to read more, for a new writer you are doing bery well so far. I love it when writing talent meets true anime love.
*Psycho otaku's voice is heard from inside the pulsating box.*
I gotta know, do hiei and Kurama end up together as insinuated in the series? what are the pairings in the story? I MUST KNOW! TELL ME!!!!!!!!! Please update soon...pleasepleasepleasepleasepleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!
*Jumps up and down* KURAMA IN CHAINS!!! LEMME AT HIM! *Drools* *Normal Raine comes in with baseball bat, beats down psycho oaku, and packs her back in her box. Puts on glasses and turns round to speak as "educated" Raine.*
Sorry about that psycho-babbling spaz...she's my other self...she breaks out every now and then. Anyway....
Excellent story so far! For not having a beta there weren't too many mistakes either, though I did sot a few. If you would like a beta, I would be happy to do it. My e-mail is on my profile.
I love the spin you are putting on the story, I can't wait to read more, for a new writer you are doing bery well so far. I love it when writing talent meets true anime love.
*Psycho otaku's voice is heard from inside the pulsating box.*
I gotta know, do hiei and Kurama end up together as insinuated in the series? what are the pairings in the story? I MUST KNOW! TELL ME!!!!!!!!! Please update soon...pleasepleasepleasepleasepleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wahhh...kawaii... please update soon and if its not soooo much trouble, email me when you do. thanks!!!
simplydurog@gmail.com
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another wonderful chapter
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awe so cute. Yusuke's such a softy letting Kurama cry on his shoulder. This fic really is very sweet and different AND IT SCREAMS FOR A LEMON! I'm hoping we get one. If for some reason you don't like writing lemons, then I would gladly write one for you for this fic. Feel free to contact me if you want ^_^ Looking forward to the next chapter. Oh, make sure to remember to space your paragraphs and dialogue apart. It makes the reading easier if it all isn't one big paragraph. Just a tip ^_~
Love and Kisses
KHL
Love and Kisses
KHL
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that started off so hot. I can't wait for things to heat up some more. Update soon.
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW great start! Haven't read anything like it before! I hope you update asap, I can't wait to read more. Oh yeah, what's going to happen to Kurama's mum? Or Hiei for that matter?
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pleaseupdate soon!! I love Yus/Kur stories and their just aren't enough of them out there!! Unless I am just not finding them!! i love yusuke as a lord!!!!!!! So please don't abdone this story!!
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has the beginings of a good story and I can't wait to see where you go with it.Now that Kurama is Yusuke's prisoner what of his mom?And what's exspected of you as a prisoner of a near god.Hope you update soon.
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting consept, I can't wait for more. Update soon.