rate_review Reviews

Very good story but where are you going to take it? Will Yusuke have to fight Heie? Will Kurama turn into Youko? What the stroy on Yusuke's parents; are they alive, is Yusuke's mom still a drunk, what about his father? What happened to Kuwabara does he exist or did he get killed by Rando? What about the Dark tournament and Genki?

The reason I ask is because your story is good but sometimes authors drop stories because of lack of ideas or the story gets tired. Send an email if you need an idea or two.

Chapter 3 was really great.I can't wait for poor Kurama to come back to himself and realize what they did.Wonder what else Yusuke has up his sleeve for the poor fox.

Danm that was hot. I get the feeling Kurama won't want to be released any time soon.

Now that was hot! I loved every word of this. Really incredible the way you putting the story. Personally, I am a fan of master/slave so this is soooooooo good for me. Wonder if Kurama passed out from the pleasure. Hell I am sure I would. Please update soooon.

I enjoy this story a lot. I didn't think the first chapter flowed very well into the second (it sounded like Yusuke was supposed to act as a parole officer or something--the word slave was never mentioned--and then suddenly it's all slave this, master that), but I can look past that. Well-written and entertaining.

wow that was hot and i think i love the idea of the cuffs i wish i had a pair.

It was my pleasure to help out with chapter 3. It's such a wonderful plot line that really begged for a lemon. I probably would have hunted you down if you didn't give us one, lol. And I'm not tired of reading it at all, lol. I did notice that the 'thoughts' we had in italics didn't come through in the post. You may want to fix that for easier reading ^_^

I can't wait to find out the little twist you have planned in the next chapter.

I'll also be chomping at the bit to help out when you get to the full blown lemon, hehehehehe. If you want me to of course.

Keep up the wonderful work. You're a quick study, girly!

Love and Kisses
KHL

PS LET'S ALL HERE IT FOR MORE YUSUKE DICK!!!!!!!!!! ^_~ AND A SEXY, SUBMISSIVE KURAMA. IT DOESN'T GET ANY BETTER THAN THAT FOLKS.

Very gool so far.Ican't wait to see how Kurama reacts to the little shower afterward.And Yusuke's reaction to not being told everything about the cuffs.Yes,Kouga's story is one of thew best and I love it so far,its nice to see two authors helping each other out.Very good so far and I can't wait for the update to see what else is planned.

WOW. You know, KHL told me about this story, so I figured that I'd check it out, and I'm not disappointed. I love the concept, and you manage to cover a lot of ground without being too wordy, which is a great thing.

Oh yeah, and the lemon was smoking *dances*

Please update soon!!! I can't wait to read more!!