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by JessieMorrison

schedule June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gods Be Cursed!!! This is how YYh should have been! Oh please i beg of you to continue this is sooo hot. I'm a beleiver that Kurama is a total 100% uke in a relationship, but what i really like here is how your portraying Yusuke. Horny, brash, and impulsive but at the same time Kind, Sincere and gentle. Honestly not a lot of people like to portray him like that and i think that's why this kind of Yusuke gets to be a favorite.

Please update soon?
person YamatraT
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
-cries- why would you stop there?!?! i hate when the stories grab me and force my attention to cling and then end just as it's getting good T_T wonderful job so far i can't wait for the next chapter... and shame on you for using the power of cliffhangers T_T <3
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is mean! Two years have passed and a completely awesome story appears to have been abandoned. Just so you know I have this story on favourites (it's never come off) and I return to it at least once a month.

Please update soon! I love this story so much!

Zekesbabe
xxx
person kerbear
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow,on chapter 4.Please tell me your going to update this reallly soon.I can't wait to see what they get into now,and for Yusuke to find out just who he really has.
Nice job so far and plase update sooon
person Mesamea
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey why are you not updating?

I love the idea of what you did to kurama.

*daydreams*
person comicfancat
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its been a small while for the update but well worth the wait.Kewa should've been able to feel his fox form,no?I can't wait for Yusuke to find that out and to know he has a great looking fox under the great looking red head.You have me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter,hope its soon.And yes the "seduction of Yusuke" is a good story and it just keeps getting better and better though I wish chapter 10 would come soon.Anyway, great job on this story and I look forward to the next chapter
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that lemon was hot. Poor Kuwabara...although he's lucky because he got a nice show before he ran screaming. I'm a little worried about Kurama losing his will permanently though.
person carlie
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok first things first, i love koga's hentai luver! the author is qiute talented in writing erotica, so, thumbs up for getting the writer to beta for you. second thing, please oh please for the love of all that is holy and in the name of boy on boy erotica, update another chapter soon!!!!!!!!! you are a good writer and i love the plot and how you're developing it, also, i love yusuke/kurama pairing (which i may dispairingly add are incredibly difficult to find) and you are doing a smashing job at portraying character development and relationship development.
please update soon,
carlie
person kit-kit
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow love this chapter i can't wait for the net chapter
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excellen story thus far, kee up the good work!!

-Raine