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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm all caught up now! And already you have me wondering what caused the falling out between Hiei and Kurama, and how Ryu (as I'm shortening his name to) came to be. Great use of the flashbacks in that last chapter. Update soon!
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I'm glad Kurama's going home. Thanks for adding where the song came from, I knew I'd heard it before. Update soon.
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. I have been looking forward to your update! I love this story, and I can't wait to see what happens when Hiei finally goes back to see Kurama. I do look forward to your update and hope to see it soon.
Ja Mata!
Ja Mata!
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very iteresting I like it. I wish it were longer though. please update, I wanna see how Kurama reacts to Hiei when he comes back
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOH! What's that Mukuro got planned for Kurama? "YOU better not hurt that precious fox, woman! You would have to answer to a pissed off Hiei then. Eep! I do not want to be around when Hiei gets pissed off! Thanks for updating, keep going!!!
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, this is definately a brilliant start. Anyone who can use a word like 'subjugate' with confidence obviously knows what they're doing. MPreg! Who would have thought, a year ago, that I would find the very mention of male pregnancy an indication of a compelling story. Should I worry? Can't wait for an update
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Short and sweet certainly applies here. I love that you've begun to write yaoi! I really love how bittersweet this one-shot was. Nice job!
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great!! Finally, I read something where Hiei is on top, most stories I read it's Kurama that is in the seme position. Please Continue to update.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOH! KyoHana come back and write more for this please! i love the idea for this and so far, albeit short, it has been very good! Update ASAP!
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start even if it was a little short. I'm looking for more. Update soon.