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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now I NEED to see chapter 4. I want to see what happens when Hiei sees his son! *flails* I love the way you write this - you nailed Yusuke's characterization, I snickered when he told Hiei that if he hurt Kurama again, Mukuro would be looking for a new heir. MORE DAMMIT!
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw! Hiei was so cute this chapter. He acted so differently to what we see in the series, and it worked out very well. Love how Yusuke lied to him about Kurama (kind of) and how Hiei knew it. Guess that goes with working so closely together for such a time. Update soon!
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Truly you absolutely MUST update! (PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE?!?!?!?!)
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A lovely fic. I think I will be checking this section every day now for an update.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nya! oh its so sad! plz update soon! i luv this story!
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! Hiei has to come out with his feelings. You really wrote Yusuke very well. He was just the right combination of loyal, protective, cocky, and just...Yusuke. I am really looking forward to reading the reunion, and the little "surprise" in store for Hiei. Heh heh heh. As always, I enjoyed your chapter immensely (even as it left me trying in vain to scroll down further for more). Although I eagerly await the next chapter, I know the wait will be worth it. Brava.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I hope you continue soon!
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is turning out to be a great story!
Can't wait for more....soon.....:)
Can't wait for more....soon.....:)
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Hiei's finally back and has come to terms with his feelings. I wonder how Kurama will react when he sees him. This is coming along really well, and thanks for the longer chapter, too.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, please don't let them miss each other, that would just be too cruel. Update soon.