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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can't wait for more!
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I so loved that scene with Ryu and Hiei. That had to rank high on my "cutest scenes" list. Ryu is like both of them in so many ways, and I'm guessing that's because he is Hiei's as well. Either way, it was too cute the way he found the fire demon. And what a mean cliffy you left on! Update soon!
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Owwww... you're mean!!! How could you end the chapter like that!
Update ASAP!
Update ASAP!
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn girl, you really know how to tease us with a cliffie! I WANT TO SEE THEM CONVERSE THEN HAVE SEX.
No, I will not calm down.
I love the way you write, it flows so well, and the conversation between Kurama and Yusuke was dead on in characterization. Also, Ryuushin's POV is cute without being overly childish and sappy. I can't gush enough about his and Hiei's conversation, that kid is ging to be uber-powerful if he's already B class! Well done.
But seriously...I need the next chapter on this, like YESTERDAY. I know I'm the biggest hypocrite when i say this, but GET TO WORK! :D
No, I will not calm down.
I love the way you write, it flows so well, and the conversation between Kurama and Yusuke was dead on in characterization. Also, Ryuushin's POV is cute without being overly childish and sappy. I can't gush enough about his and Hiei's conversation, that kid is ging to be uber-powerful if he's already B class! Well done.
But seriously...I need the next chapter on this, like YESTERDAY. I know I'm the biggest hypocrite when i say this, but GET TO WORK! :D
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh!! I wonder who found Hiei and Ryu-chan. I bet I know! *shifty eyes*. Update real soon will ya!
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I left the bulk of my review for you on fanfiction.net, but I forgot to add one thing and they were being a douche about my trying to review twice for the same chapter -__-
Anyways, I only wished to add, reading your notes there about Ryuushin's name, that I think that's pretty cool how much thought you put into that. I must admit, I didn't have any special reason for naming my Jagaminos the names I gave them ^_^
Anyways, I only wished to add, reading your notes there about Ryuushin's name, that I think that's pretty cool how much thought you put into that. I must admit, I didn't have any special reason for naming my Jagaminos the names I gave them ^_^
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHH KyoHana another cliff hanger... are you trying to kill me? I loved this chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Pleaseee update soon. Pretty please? If I promise to have the next chapter to Sensual Sadism out perhaps tonight, latest tomorrow night will you update soon? ::Leaves lots of gifts for the wonderful writer.::
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a wicked place to leave it. Great chapter. Update soon.
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo no chapter 4??????? wwaaaaa! sniff, i wanna read it, hurry up!!! cliff hanger waaaaa!!!
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mm, fun--we're getting *so* deliciously close to the "Ohh ... *fuck*!" part XD
The reunion between Yusuke and Hiei was most amusing, and I think very canon-type as well. Shall be incredibly interesting to see how it goes when he sees the others (Kurama and Yukina in particular)--and of course when he sees the heir's heir, eh?
The reunion between Yusuke and Hiei was most amusing, and I think very canon-type as well. Shall be incredibly interesting to see how it goes when he sees the others (Kurama and Yukina in particular)--and of course when he sees the heir's heir, eh?