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Awww. Just, Awww. I want more. I'll beg. It's cute. I really like it, so you know, whenever you get around to it, I'd love an update.

GREAT story can't wait for an update.

The fox scene was just so adorable! I love this sotry!

Awwe sooo sweet!

OK. The cutest thing ever is Ryuushin hugging that red fox kit. Cutest. Thing. Ever. And what makes me think that Hiei will buy Ryuushin a small stuffed fox to go with his stuffen dragon? :D

I like Hiei's silent demeanor even while he's dealing with crowds on the train, speaking with Shiori, or sitting with his son. You write him well - he has a certain peace about him, but he's not OOC. Very nice.\

MOAR.

Ryuushin rolling his eyes and Hn-ing? Priceless. So was the discussion between Hiei and Shiori. Shiori raised Kurama, so she can handle her own in a "converstaion" with Hiei, and it was very entertaining to watch (my stomach was in knots a bit as well). I really can't wait to see some kind of resolution between our favourite bois. I know it will take Kurama time to heal, and hell, if I was him I wouldn't be as forgiving, but I still want to see them together soon.

Another great chapter, which I took entirely too long to review. You rock!

I love the dynamic you're building between Shiori and Hiei. The chapter, the whole talk between Shiori and Hiei, came out beautifully; brava! I agree that she would see him as one of her own, but face him "on eggshells" almost, determined to prevent her son's heart from breaking again, but unwilling to write off her "other son." I can't wait to see how you develop this further.

One thing occurred to me. If Hiei and Kurama do get back together, will Ryuu have a little brother or sister to watch over? I imagine Hiei would love to be around for another child and go through the gestation and infancy he missed. But that can wait; right now the boys have some healing to do. I'm pretty sure they're on the right track, though, since Kurama used Hiei's nickname. Little details like that, and how it made Hiei feel, give your story such depth and make it personal, not just narrative.

Great job, and I eagerly await more. When you're ready to post it, I'll be ready to read it!

I'm so happy that your back and writing again. Anyway Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Awww! How utterly kawaii! ^.^ Can't wait for Hiei to get to know his son!!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so sweet and sad at first when my two fav charries started to talk (Poor Hiei and Kurama) and then so beautiful toward the end. Hiei was adorable at his happiness at Kurama calling him "his son" Awww. Okay so KyoHana I suppose I owe you an update now... you've updated twice since my last update. I've already begun writing the next chapter... I think I'm on page three... still a ways to go... it'll be somewhere between 6-10 pages I believe. I'm going to try to get it out this weekend as a thank you to you for updating again... but I'm studying for college finals at the same time and I have to prepare a speech for Tuesday so we'll see. Beautiful chapter and I look forward to the next!