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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty good. I liked how everything turned out, that's for sure! But some parts seemed more like you were telling a story. Like there wasn't any emotion in it, they were just words. Everything else was really great, though! Nice job!
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I greatly enjoyed this one. You've got a definite grasp on writing yaoi now, I look forward to reading more. Update soon please.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I don't see enough of Kuronue with his fox. I guess this was a premonition only it happened after his own death.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was good and i enjoyed reading it. i cant wait to find out what happens next. there aren't that many yoko/kuronue stories out there so i hope this on works out. keep it up, you're doing great. : )