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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why do you win the internet?
Because Hiei topped Yusuke - WITH KOENMA WATCHING. *standing ovation*
I liked Kurama in this story. Some writers forget he's a demon (I know, WTF?) and I do like the sweet Shuuichi, but really, he's Kurama and he's demony and evil and sensual and protective of what he wants. You hit that right on.
Of course it goes without saying that Yusuke and Hiei are acting like idiots, but if they were in a relationship, that's the way they'd be.
*waits patiently for chapter 2*.
Because Hiei topped Yusuke - WITH KOENMA WATCHING. *standing ovation*
I liked Kurama in this story. Some writers forget he's a demon (I know, WTF?) and I do like the sweet Shuuichi, but really, he's Kurama and he's demony and evil and sensual and protective of what he wants. You hit that right on.
Of course it goes without saying that Yusuke and Hiei are acting like idiots, but if they were in a relationship, that's the way they'd be.
*waits patiently for chapter 2*.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gahhhhh! Yusuke is so fucking stupid. I love my Yusuke but he's just so fucking stupid and dense. And I think Hiei acted totally cool by fucking what's his in front of Koenma, instead of killing them both. Hiei showed a lot of restraint. And I think had it been Kurama, Kurama would have killed them. I also agree with Blue. Hiei topping Yusuke in front of Koenma ROCKS!!!!!!!! Yeah baby, give it to Yusuke real good.
I can't wait for the second chapter. Now, Yusuke still has to move to Makai so I wonder how everything is going to play out. And I wonder if Koenma might have something more to say or do. I also think that Kurama should knock both their heads together and say "Snap out of it." LOL. But knowing Kurama, he'll just sit back and enjoy the show. He's so fucking evil sometimes.
Ohhhhh, I just can't wait for more. ^_^
Love and Kisses
Kogas Hentai Luver
I can't wait for the second chapter. Now, Yusuke still has to move to Makai so I wonder how everything is going to play out. And I wonder if Koenma might have something more to say or do. I also think that Kurama should knock both their heads together and say "Snap out of it." LOL. But knowing Kurama, he'll just sit back and enjoy the show. He's so fucking evil sometimes.
Ohhhhh, I just can't wait for more. ^_^
Love and Kisses
Kogas Hentai Luver
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn. and it's all a big misunderstanding. haha. great piece. hope you update soon. :D
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, what a cliffie, and you say I am bad about them. I want to know what happens next. Please? You did a fantasic bang up job writing this. Please update soon.
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn i can't believe it..i thought there were going to get back togerther now i see i may have to wait for that.i hope yusuke isn't stupid enough to go back to koenma or something.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh men can be so stupid and in this case stubborn. Update soon.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I really liked that story, you shouldn't make it a two shot that story needs way more than two chapters, I can't wait to see what you do next.
I really liked that story, you shouldn't make it a two shot that story needs way more than two chapters, I can't wait to see what you do next.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great fic, Ryu, very well done! I can't wait to red the next!