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for Before The Storm

by ryukotsusei

person FluffyFox
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoied this one to the fullist! Thanks for putting it up!

Ja Ne!
person faerygirl44
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know its been a while...This was a really great fic...could def see it becoming a full one ^.^;
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yayyyyyy!!!!! Kurama to the rescue, pointing out how stupid and dense Yusuke is, for example: “Are you even capable of thinking when it comes to something other than a physical fight Yusuke? This has to be the stupidest thing I have ever seen you do." That was a kick ass line. And then he drags Yusuke by the collar like a bad little boy to the portal to Makai.

It was so cool how Mukuro confronted Yusuke. She’s so cool and no one fucks with her firebrat! Then you had me on pins and needles during Hiei’s fight with those other demons and then Yusuke comes in at just the right moment to save him before Hiei collapses.

What an awesome build up before the next lemon. And Puu was so cute. And Hiei was so sexy and so Hiei and Yusuke was so Yusuke and the lemon was so HOT and I don’t know what else to say except KEEP THE PORN COMING MY QUEEN OF YUSUKE/HIEI PAIRINGS. I’ll never get enough. And even though I sound like a broken record saying this, I’ll say it again! No one keeps our boys in character the way you do. You are truly a gift to us all each and every time you put pen to paper or your fingers to the keyboard ^_^

You keep it up. And I want my naked Yusuke drawing with him sporting a big thick cock! LOL ^_^ I need more Yusuke dick!

Love and Kisses
KHL
person Demon Usagi
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1. They had to prove their love (not lust)
2. They had a lover's spat, but it was resolved at the end in a cute manner
3. No cheesiness
4. The plot didn't go too fast or too slow. xD
5. They made love at the perfect moment, and Hiichan was uke!! YEAH!!

This fic made me all squishy inside. It's my favorite from you yet! I hope to see more of your fics soon. x3 Keep up the awesome work!
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know what I like about your fiction? You write STORIES. I mean, I love PWP as much as the next yaoi fangirl, but when there's a good plot AND there's porn, it makes me want to do a little dance...like this: *shakes it*

The fight scene was wonderful, and you get points for a blind Hiei and for using Puu in such a kick ass manner. Oh yeah AND THE PORN WAS GREAT - I LOVE THE DEMANDING HIEI UKE. YAY.
person shiori_foxies_mom@yahoo.com
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A nice yummy lemon and a happy ending. That's my kind of story.
person Takhisiss (nsi)
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great ending to this story. And I love the way that you made use of Puu in the story, I oftentimes think he doesn't get used near enough. Mukuro's part was interesting too, I'm surprised she didn't somehow show up at that fight the same time Yusuke did. Overall great job. Keep up the good work.
person kit-kit
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another amazing story
person loveless101
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that an author as good as you is as into this yaoi pairing as i am!!! I was surprised to see you on this website. I only know you from mediaminer.org and recently fanfiction.net. Wow, really great jobs on your stories. Update soon!
person biscuit
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well written. please get them back together :)